help me with my song/poem?

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i wrote this song to kind of sum up the twilight series. tell me if you like it or not as a song or a poem.

Our Forever
verse 1
My life changed forever in this one moment.
She was sitting right there but couldn’t be real.
She talked to me like an old friend.
She saw no evil in my eyes.
She was different from the rest some how.
Impossible to read.
chorus
I shouldn’t love her but I must.
I must protect her from me.
The one she loves is the one she can’t have
But will get for she looks evil in the eye and laughs.
verse 2
The worst is coming for her.
I should of protected her better.
Or left when I had the chance.
For now I must fight for the one I love.
The one I shouldn’t but feel the need to.
chorus
I shouldn’t love her but I must.
I must protect her from me.
The one she loves is the one she can’t have
But will get for she looks evil in the eye and laughs.
verse 3
The bad is over, but the worst is in its place.
Coming for revenge on my lover.
I must fight again for the one I love.
This day we shall marry.
Her last human memory.
Which will fade for her, but last forever to me.
chorus
I shouldn’t love her, but I must.
I must protect her from me.
For the one she wants, is the one she can’t have.
verse 4
But will get. For she looks evil in the eye and laughs.
She is mine forever. And so is our child.
She has done the impossible. Had my kind’s child. I am now losing her fast.
I must protect her, with me. She is now filled with me. And now one of me.
And now we can start our forever.
chorus
For I am now free to love her.
As much as a desire.
For the one she wants, she can now have,
For we will forever look evil in the eye and laugh.

like it?
should it be a song or a poem?
 
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