X xixxxix New member Jan 11, 2011 #1 Calm but stormy night; The trees swing from side to side, Then comes the loud boom. I need your ideas and opinions on making this haiku better! Thank you very much in advance!
Calm but stormy night; The trees swing from side to side, Then comes the loud boom. I need your ideas and opinions on making this haiku better! Thank you very much in advance!
