Help I want your opinion on my poem?

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Deathbat

Dear, Deathbat,
Come join me,
On an adventure,
Come guide me,
I've never been on these roads before,
But don't come alone,
I need more than one,
Your long wings,
And the deathly mist you leave behind,
It amazes me,
Your so beautiful,
Deathbat,
Will you follow me past the walls of death,
Or will you make me join,
The mist shrouds a rainy day,
Lets go now,
It's the best time.



Yes, I got the name Deathbat from Avenged Sevenfold. And it's spelled correctly.
 
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