Catherine finished whipping off her thick makeup before sitting down on her bed. She looked at Jean with a sigh. She could sense she was still shaken for the shooting like she was. She slapped Jean's leg and laughed.
“Are you okay Jean?”
Jean snapped out of her trance. “Oh, yes I’m fine. You okay?”
Catherine's demenor tensed. “Yeah. We could have died.”
Jean smiled. “It was sweet of Alex and Mike to block us with their bodies.”
“They take care of their women.” Catherine grinned.
“So did you guys have fun?” Jean raised her brow to her.
She smiled remembering the thrill. “Yeah, we went on almost all the rides, you?”
“You know I hate the crazy ones.”
“You didn’t even go on the Farris wheel did you?”
Jean began to pout. “We were headed there then the shooting broke out.”
“At least you got a cute pillow.”
Jean looked down at her new pillow. “Oh yeah.” She laughed and picked up hugging it tightly.
Catherine lay down on her bed and switched on their favorite movie. Jean inched back and laid beside her, facing her she analyzed her face. She wished she could do something to make her feel happier about her heartache. Mike was a nice guy but Catherine admitted she didn’t want to be in a long term relationship for while. She just wanted to have fun before she got too old.
“Are you still thinking about your ex boyfriend?”
Catherine kept her eyes on the TV. “Which one?”
“Oh yeah you have a lot of ex boyfriends, never mind.” Jean didn’t want her thinking of the past.
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“Are you okay Jean?”
Jean snapped out of her trance. “Oh, yes I’m fine. You okay?”
Catherine's demenor tensed. “Yeah. We could have died.”
Jean smiled. “It was sweet of Alex and Mike to block us with their bodies.”
“They take care of their women.” Catherine grinned.
“So did you guys have fun?” Jean raised her brow to her.
She smiled remembering the thrill. “Yeah, we went on almost all the rides, you?”
“You know I hate the crazy ones.”
“You didn’t even go on the Farris wheel did you?”
Jean began to pout. “We were headed there then the shooting broke out.”
“At least you got a cute pillow.”
Jean looked down at her new pillow. “Oh yeah.” She laughed and picked up hugging it tightly.
Catherine lay down on her bed and switched on their favorite movie. Jean inched back and laid beside her, facing her she analyzed her face. She wished she could do something to make her feel happier about her heartache. Mike was a nice guy but Catherine admitted she didn’t want to be in a long term relationship for while. She just wanted to have fun before she got too old.
“Are you still thinking about your ex boyfriend?”
Catherine kept her eyes on the TV. “Which one?”
“Oh yeah you have a lot of ex boyfriends, never mind.” Jean didn’t want her thinking of the past.
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