Health Care reform research paper thesis statement; what sounds better?

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"Whereas the general consensus of Americans agree that reform of our healthcare system is necessary, debate continues to rage over what type of reform we need."

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"Whereas the overwhelming majority of Americans agree that reform of our healthcare system is necessary, debate continues to rage over what specific type of reform we need."

Which is better? Should anything be added? Have a better one?

Thanks!
 
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