Grey attire

[littlemunchie]

the staples in their eyes
can't hide that they're asleep
and the tears along their cheeks
never fooled us

your grey attire connected
to your organs with a wire
and circular disks that slip
into your spine, they never tire

if you're ready to lie
in the attic, shave your wrists
with morphine leaking from your eyes
a brain that bursts in cysts

then please don't tell the doctor
that i helped you along

Yeah, lots of points for guessing what this is about, I don't think it's particularly great and the last line kind of irks me, but it's the only thing I could think of that fits.

 

[Samiiee]

assisted suicide?

idk

the last line is that bad dude, id like to hear a recording of this

 

[chickennugget128]

I deleted the last two lines, i might think of something else

 

[Montezumo]

I genuinely love this song, great imagery. But you definitely need to end this on a stronger note. Don't mean to write the song for you by any means, but relating your specific actions of "helping you along" to a medical malfunction could possibly be amazing.

 

[Me Fang You]

^ What he said. It is really good otherwise.