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i am an english learner,can anyone help me modifying this essay?just point out unsuitable phrases and words, also some grammatical mistakes.thanks
There are two girls,whose star signs are sagittarius and aquarius.so they call each other s and a.they are common ones whom you can meet in every corner of the crowd.they are special,for the reason that they cherish all tiny things in lives which others may neglect.with their words,they weave songs of their own.dancing to the melody of nostalgia,their reminiscence is never submerged by time.
S :Oscar WildeWe once said"Anyone can sympathize with the sufferings of a friend, but it requires a very fine nature to sympathize with a friend's success."we may not be surrounded by friends everytime,but we know their exietence.our clay may decay as time goes by,but our friendship will be the permanent sign which proves what we once went through. So, in your opinion, what is a friend like?
A: a Friend is more than a person,He is an encouragement;A friend is more than an encouragement,
He is a faith you believe in;A friend is more than a faith,He is a lightower to guide you;A friend is more than a lightower,He is a star gleamming constantly;A friend is more than a star,For you, He is the whole universe.
A: In<Wuthering Heights>,Katherine says:" my love to for Linton is like the foliage in the woods,time will change it, as winter changes the trees. My love for Heathcliff resembles the eternal rocks beneath,a source of little visible delight, but necessary."In novel<gone with the wind>,the author Left us an unkonwn ending. But according to your understanding ,what is Rhett Butler's love to Scarlett,is it leaf or rock?
S: It's neither leaf nor rock. It is a rose. When it's in spring, it dedicates all its blood and life to love, never being regretful. Rhett Butler only wants Scarlett to be a drop sunshine,who can share a little warmth with him. But this humble simple and tiny wish cannot be realized.Scarlett is too obstinate to confront her voice arising from her heart.She just takes it for granted and spontaneously goes blind with everyting Rhett has done for her. Ultimately,Rhett's patience,hope and passion are all killed.So, the rose dies in autumn, after he comes to know what he has done these years is in vain.
A:life means non-stop discovering.Never let our lives rest as long as we are still taking every breath;as long as we can feel every beat of our hearts. Archimedes spent his last second climbing montain of maths, Fernando de Magallanes died finding the truth of the earth's shape.when do you think is the golden time for one to find and seek?
S
f course,the youngest years.when we are teens,we hold a curiosity about this world.as we grow mature,this precious loyalty to discovery vanishes without trace.when the energy,the passion still exist in our life,why not follow the voice of our hearts and be a climber to the top of adventure's moutains?after all,we cam always make life full of possibilities.
A.as we are marching on the way to the future,it goes without saying that we have had many pities through the past years.althogh we can choose the direction we are approaching to,we can not do anything with what has happened.but if you could go back to the past,was there anything that you wanted to change?
S:There was.I would treature all my spare time to operate my hobbies so that I won't feel empty when I grow into an adult.I would go jogging every day and eat more fresh vegetabes .I would never stay up late in night ,just to enjoy a simple life.
AEveryone's life is a single-pass ticket which leads us to the same destination.meanwhile,we can only drink in the views which belong to the given journey.However, when we enter into different novels,when we take every breath with the characters,when we feel what they are feeling,when we see what they are seeing,when we hear what they are hearing, we get uncountable experince. If you could turn yourself into a character you apperciate in a novel,who would you choose?
S:Well,that is a gorgeous question.whatever the plots or the characters in novels always spring from our reality,meanwhile,they stand higher than reality.you can easily undergo the diverse experiences through following the characters' steps of lives.
First name occurred to me was Mary in Secert Garden.She is such a dainty girl in the novel.it is her who finds out the entrance to the Secert Garden and then discover the true meaning of happiness through her own braveness.Growing into a pure and earnest lady out of a lonely,selfish girl is really a kind of enjoyable experience.because eventually,I can obtain what qualities I long for.
Every question is a container of wisdom Every answer is the collision against two souls We capture each fleeting second We see the infinite universe Young and energetic as weLet our thoughts transcend the space and time And be the endless echoes flowing in the air
There are two girls,whose star signs are sagittarius and aquarius.so they call each other s and a.they are common ones whom you can meet in every corner of the crowd.they are special,for the reason that they cherish all tiny things in lives which others may neglect.with their words,they weave songs of their own.dancing to the melody of nostalgia,their reminiscence is never submerged by time.
S :Oscar WildeWe once said"Anyone can sympathize with the sufferings of a friend, but it requires a very fine nature to sympathize with a friend's success."we may not be surrounded by friends everytime,but we know their exietence.our clay may decay as time goes by,but our friendship will be the permanent sign which proves what we once went through. So, in your opinion, what is a friend like?
A: a Friend is more than a person,He is an encouragement;A friend is more than an encouragement,
He is a faith you believe in;A friend is more than a faith,He is a lightower to guide you;A friend is more than a lightower,He is a star gleamming constantly;A friend is more than a star,For you, He is the whole universe.
A: In<Wuthering Heights>,Katherine says:" my love to for Linton is like the foliage in the woods,time will change it, as winter changes the trees. My love for Heathcliff resembles the eternal rocks beneath,a source of little visible delight, but necessary."In novel<gone with the wind>,the author Left us an unkonwn ending. But according to your understanding ,what is Rhett Butler's love to Scarlett,is it leaf or rock?
S: It's neither leaf nor rock. It is a rose. When it's in spring, it dedicates all its blood and life to love, never being regretful. Rhett Butler only wants Scarlett to be a drop sunshine,who can share a little warmth with him. But this humble simple and tiny wish cannot be realized.Scarlett is too obstinate to confront her voice arising from her heart.She just takes it for granted and spontaneously goes blind with everyting Rhett has done for her. Ultimately,Rhett's patience,hope and passion are all killed.So, the rose dies in autumn, after he comes to know what he has done these years is in vain.
A:life means non-stop discovering.Never let our lives rest as long as we are still taking every breath;as long as we can feel every beat of our hearts. Archimedes spent his last second climbing montain of maths, Fernando de Magallanes died finding the truth of the earth's shape.when do you think is the golden time for one to find and seek?
S
f course,the youngest years.when we are teens,we hold a curiosity about this world.as we grow mature,this precious loyalty to discovery vanishes without trace.when the energy,the passion still exist in our life,why not follow the voice of our hearts and be a climber to the top of adventure's moutains?after all,we cam always make life full of possibilities.A.as we are marching on the way to the future,it goes without saying that we have had many pities through the past years.althogh we can choose the direction we are approaching to,we can not do anything with what has happened.but if you could go back to the past,was there anything that you wanted to change?
S:There was.I would treature all my spare time to operate my hobbies so that I won't feel empty when I grow into an adult.I would go jogging every day and eat more fresh vegetabes .I would never stay up late in night ,just to enjoy a simple life.
AEveryone's life is a single-pass ticket which leads us to the same destination.meanwhile,we can only drink in the views which belong to the given journey.However, when we enter into different novels,when we take every breath with the characters,when we feel what they are feeling,when we see what they are seeing,when we hear what they are hearing, we get uncountable experince. If you could turn yourself into a character you apperciate in a novel,who would you choose?
S:Well,that is a gorgeous question.whatever the plots or the characters in novels always spring from our reality,meanwhile,they stand higher than reality.you can easily undergo the diverse experiences through following the characters' steps of lives.
First name occurred to me was Mary in Secert Garden.She is such a dainty girl in the novel.it is her who finds out the entrance to the Secert Garden and then discover the true meaning of happiness through her own braveness.Growing into a pure and earnest lady out of a lonely,selfish girl is really a kind of enjoyable experience.because eventually,I can obtain what qualities I long for.
Every question is a container of wisdom Every answer is the collision against two souls We capture each fleeting second We see the infinite universe Young and energetic as weLet our thoughts transcend the space and time And be the endless echoes flowing in the air