Girls, my brother-in-law asked me to give him one of my love-poems to give his g/f.

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which one should I give? Which one would you want to get?

1)
I believe that God above.
Created me for you to love.
He picked me from all the rest.
Because He knew you’d love me best.
I believe that God above.
Created you for me to love.
He picked you from all the rest.
Because He knew I’d love you best.
Now this poem has come to an end.
And I must say goodbye my friend.

2)
When we are far apart.
Can loneliness break my heart.
I dream of having you here.
Sleep is sweet when you are near.
All is calm when you are close.
Night is falling so I must close.
With this poem, I have a message in mind.
You must read the first word in each line.
 
I would say #2, unless this guy and his GF are really religious. #1 seems more about the person being in love with god, rather then the girl. The poem should emphasize the girl he is in love with, not the religious deity.
 
AWWH those are such nice poems! but maybe the second one, no the first one.. no... the second one:)
 
he should write his own it would mean more to his girlfriend... but if you must choose then #2
 
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