Girls and guys poll! Romantic poetry?

[katiekat]

what would you say if your boyfriend wrote you this?
guys- would you ever write your girlfriend poetry like this? Or is poetry not manly enough?


My heart burns at the sight of you.
please say your still in love too.
don't run away.
forever we could be.
the brightest star in the galexy.
my love for you is classified as.
the tallest peak.
in all the land.


i literally just wrote that when i made up the question.
i want to sneak it into this guys locker.
should i do it or is it not very good?
i know i spelled galaxy wrong people! get over it!
btw. he is also a great poetry writter and likes mushy(ish) things.

 

[Danielle]

its nice. you have good writing skills. as long as you think its worth it. go for it.

 

[Reteniuk]

I don't think it really flows, poetry should flow. I like the first two lines, but the rest doesn't really flow or "go together". Just my opinion. But if you are happy with it, then you can put it in his locker. I personally wouldn't, because it would seem cheesy or lame. But that's just the way it is around here. Anyways, do what YOU feel like doing!