Girls and guys: Does this poem I wrote for my girlfriend sound O.K?

  • Thread starter Thread starter cathy
  • Start date Start date
I love her so much, I wrote this for her last night. I don't know if I should give it to her, I'm not the best at poetry lol. If i give this to her would it be totally lame!?

For my girl...
From the first time I saw you standing there, I knew we had something special.
You're the girl for me, through the good times and the bad.
The way you laugh at almost anything makes me smile.
The way you run up to me and hug me makes me so happy.
The look you give me when I kiss you sends shivers up my spine.
I love you for you, nothing more and nothing less.
I think you're beautiful no matter what, and I love you.


love forever,
your man



On it is a collage of pictures of her and I put below each one a little message



she's the second one from the left with the brown hair and the white shirt

http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=pollockpines.jpg
below this one I put
"you're always smiling"


she's in the middle
http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=006.jpg
I wrote,
"I wish I could have been there babe"



http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=fallon009.jpg
I wrote,
"I love your beautiful green eyes"



http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=fallon013.jpg
"and your long dark hair"


http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=fallon018.jpg
"I love how you can be goofy"


http://s296.photobucket.com/albums/mm194/cocochoochoo/?action=view&current=fallon025.jpg
"you make me happy"
 
I think it's sweet and no it's not lame. If I was her I would be so happy that you were thoughtful enough because most guys aren't!
 
if you really mean all of it and you love her and vice-versa, i'm sure she'll adore it! and this is also irrelevant but WOW! your girlfriend is absolutely beautiful.
 
i reckon you just want girls to say how sweet that is because you woudnt just included all that and if you really wanted to see if someone like your poem you wud have sed do you like this poem if no why it is for my girl friends.straight up.
 
That is definitely a great thing to do for her! I mean, even if the poem wasn't good (it is), she'll appreciate it. I mean, it's hard enough to find a guy, let alone a guy who actually cares about you and will take time thinking about you and thinking of something to do for you. Soo yea it is a great idea to give her that. I'm sure she will love it, i know I would if I had a boyfriend give me something like it. so good luck! :)
 
Back
Top