(1)
We wove a web and now we share
(In insect buzz, they call ensnare).
The human weave, a different fare
(But cyber spiders stalk this lair).
(2)
If knowledge grows from all we learned
Does future actions show intent.
Or do we kneel, our spirit spent
To alters of the past long burned.
(3)
Remove your tarnished, plated crown.
Cast out the myths you self induced
Beneath the rubble lies the truth.
You will not fail. It will be found.
#2 - L-2- Change "Does" to "Do".
#2 - L4 - "To alters of our longings burned"
Thanks,
G
We wove a web and now we share
(In insect buzz, they call ensnare).
The human weave, a different fare
(But cyber spiders stalk this lair).
(2)
If knowledge grows from all we learned
Does future actions show intent.
Or do we kneel, our spirit spent
To alters of the past long burned.
(3)
Remove your tarnished, plated crown.
Cast out the myths you self induced
Beneath the rubble lies the truth.
You will not fail. It will be found.
#2 - L-2- Change "Does" to "Do".
#2 - L4 - "To alters of our longings burned"
Thanks,
G