crazychick
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Dear Financial Aid Committee,
I am writing to you to appeal my suspension for federal aid. The summer semester of 2010 was a very stressful and overwhelming time in my life. I was not only returning to school after being out of out for five years, but i was also working taking care of my disabled aunt. Besides from her being wheel chair ridden, that summer she was found a throat tumor which made her severely sick. She needed 24 hour surveillance. My aunt has no family and very little help from the government. I had to care for her and attend school for 5 hours a day. I do realize i neglected my studies and take full responsibility and would like another chance. I will resign from my full time job in order to give school my full attention.My goal is to graduate with a degree in criminal justice as soon as possible so i can graduate on time, but i need financial aid to help me since i cannot afford for to attend school. I understand that financial aid is a privilege, but i am serious about my education. Thank you for taking the time reading this and considering my appeal.
Dear Financial Aid Committee,
I am writing to you to appeal my suspension for federal aid. The summer semester of 2010 was a very stressful and overwhelming time in my life. I was not only returning to school after being out of out for five years, but i was also working taking care of my disabled aunt. Besides from her being wheel chair ridden, that summer she was found a throat tumor which made her severely sick. She needed 24 hour surveillance. My aunt has no family and very little help from the government. I had to care for her and attend school for 5 hours a day. I do realize i neglected my studies and take full responsibility and would like another chance. I will resign from my full time job in order to give school my full attention.My goal is to graduate with a degree in criminal justice as soon as possible so i can graduate on time, but i need financial aid to help me since i cannot afford for to attend school. I understand that financial aid is a privilege, but i am serious about my education. Thank you for taking the time reading this and considering my appeal.