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I have been working as a sales representative in the manufacturing industry for almost three years. When I worked as an account executive, I needed to coordinate with the internal departments and clients to confirm the specifications of products and project development. In the meanwhile, I also needed to negotiate the best price and delivery date with the customers in order to create the best interests for both of company and clients. If necessary, I needed to represent my company to visit the clients internationally so that I am able to work independently and take the business trip to approach new clients on my own. My job experience as a sales supervisor required me to conduct the product presentations to the foreign clients and make sure they understand the product features and advantage. I also needed to review the pending issues with my sales team weekly in order to deliver the troubleshooting solutions to the clients once the disputes were raised. All of my job experience has made me become the qualified candidate for this job position.
I have been working as a sales representative in the manufacturing industry for almost three years. When I worked as an account executive, I needed to coordinate with the internal departments and clients to confirm the specifications of products and project development. In the meanwhile, I also needed to negotiate the best price and delivery date with the customers in order to create the best interests for both of company and clients. If necessary, I needed to represent my company to visit the clients internationally so that I am able to work independently and take the business trip to approach new clients on my own. My job experience as a sales supervisor required me to conduct the product presentations to the foreign clients and make sure they understand the product features and advantage. I also needed to review the pending issues with my sales team weekly in order to deliver the troubleshooting solutions to the clients once the disputes were raised. All of my job experience has made me become the qualified candidate for this job position.