errors or mistakes on a poem (its about my friend leaving for a foster home)?

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Come back home

Your beautiful laughter and causal sarcasm will be absent, but only for a while.
But it’s only a year and I know it seems so long, and knowing you, you’ll make it.
I’m so proud of your good decisions and I wish you ‘d made them sooner.
And incase your wondering, yes, you do deserve a second chance, and trust me you get it.
But not now.
I really will miss you, and already to the point of bitter delirium that swells the mind.
And honestly, I believe we are all to close to hysterics right now
Ill cry for you, but you’ll be doing most of crying; therefore you’ll need more comfort.
So when you get lonely, and when life gets cruel,
Close your eyes, and remember we are waiting for you to come back home
And when I get lonely and life gets cruel, I’ll close my eyes and remember you are waiting,
To come back home
 
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