English is ok?

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agracc

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Hi all,

We are lauching a new PalmOS game in the marketting and english is not our 1st language, so I just want to know it you could help us to check if is something that sounds wrong or strange in the text below.

This text is the text information found in download page.

thanks for the comments, here follow the text to be checked and your comments are very welcome:
 
Certainly better than 85% of the texts attached to other freeware and sometimes COMMERCIAL software!

It is a little "off-putting" when you download something and things are spelled incorrectly -- on the other hand some of my best stuff has typos in it and I figured the developer's busy developing, rather than being an English teacher. Nice of you to consider it, though.

Looks fine and good luck with it!
 
Yup pretty good as PTL said. Just one suggestion;

"You need to find fast the free cells to get extra time bonus. "
should probably read
"You need to find the free cells quickly to get an extra time bonus."
or even
"In order to get more time, you must find the free cells quickly.".....
 
Hi All,

Thanks for all your comments.

I already updated the description using all the comments:



also the live version:

http://www.micromagiclabs.com/magiclick

The updates take sometime to be updated in all servers.

For those who tried the game: Any of you have any comments about the game itself? Bad points? Points to improve? Thanks all
 
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