Ending to first free verse poem..plz read?

Jordan

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I'm working on a horror story poem called "The Cannibal"... This is the end of it.. Of course there's a story in it, but this end is kind of a teaser.. What do you think??

There's corruption in everyone,
And some hide it perfectly.
But when there seems to be
No humanity left,
The vail is lifted.
The vail that hides*
The cannibal in us all.
Thanks lol.. I was wondering how to spell that
 
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