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Avinash K

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Chocolate


When i touched the hair,black long and silk
so soft,i afraid it will melt like dairymilk.
Lips like honeyfab,sweet and steady
voice just like a baby,filled with melody.

In sun cold rain or any climate,
you are my favorite,you are my chocolate.


Yeah we fought,hated,you you wanted to punch
still in angry as crispy as munch.
You laughed,when i said lets go to the star
the teeth inside your smile reminded the milkybar.


In earth moon mars or any comet
You are my favorite you are my chocolate.
 
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