Does this twilight poem make sense?

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Braidee S

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This poem uses the number of letters in each row according to pi (3.14159265358979). Does it make sense? Please make any criticisms you want! Please help me! Here it is:

Twilight
Run.
a
Jump
a
chase
Territory
he
Edward
found
his
feast
murderer
merciless
vampire
enigmatic
Ok? So what is that thing missing? Help!
 
yes but no
you are not done
there is something missing in the middle and at the end
you need to flow .....diction is very random
 
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