...are a few holes in it!? So theres this girl, and when she was a young child her parents disappeared, and she just goes along with the story that they were murdered. She is a shapeshifter, meaning that she can transform into a wolf. What she doesnt know is that, when she was born, before her parents were "murdered" her body was genetically modified, enabling her to transform into a wolf at will.
Theres more, involving her falling in love, and the boy helping her discover the truth about herself. Also, the big event in the story is that the people who helped her parents genetically modify her, had made a deal, with the girls parents, that if they helped them to trransform their child, in return the girls parents would have to turn her over to them, as they(the people who transformed her, are part of a secret organziation)
But, as the girl's parents have disappeared they do not, complete their half of the deal, and so the people are set to kidnap the girl.
Yes, i know there are a lot of holes in the plot, if you could please tell me how i can make it better, i would appreciate it greatly.
Theres more, involving her falling in love, and the boy helping her discover the truth about herself. Also, the big event in the story is that the people who helped her parents genetically modify her, had made a deal, with the girls parents, that if they helped them to trransform their child, in return the girls parents would have to turn her over to them, as they(the people who transformed her, are part of a secret organziation)
But, as the girl's parents have disappeared they do not, complete their half of the deal, and so the people are set to kidnap the girl.
Yes, i know there are a lot of holes in the plot, if you could please tell me how i can make it better, i would appreciate it greatly.