Does this sonnet sound all right in terms of punctuation and such?

Kaylie

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Animals fascinate me to no end.
When I grow up, I plan to be a vet,
And animals will be what I will mend,
Whether they are wild or people's pets.
My question is whether it is possible.
Am I committed enough to succeed?
Getting good grades would not be optional
If I want to do creatures a good deed.
I would need to get into a college
So I can get a medical degree.
Pet owners' concerns I will acknowledge.
Their pets will go home healthy as can be.
My desire to help all people's pets
Is what will drive me to become a vet.
Sorry but that website doesn't help me at all. I kinda just need a yes or no.
 
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