Does this sentence make sense?

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It sounds really awkward to be but I can't figure out how to fix it?

Instead, they wanted to reform it in such a way that they would all earn a little bit more respect.

I'm trying to say that the villagers wanted to change the government so that they would be treated better. Help please?
 
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