does this seem like a good story line?

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Alexis

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It's about a fairy school and her fathers the king and shes in love with another fairy named gabriel well her father starts killing everybody to rule the world and his daughter must decide to kill him or not. Abby and Gabriel immediately start hiding from her father and when he finds her he kidnaps her and Gabriel must find her. I'm only eleven criticize please
 
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