does this poem have potential?

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xoh kristina xoh

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this is all i have so far it is in format aaba

your love is passionate for me
like it always will be
you can tell me goodbye
but i know you will come back eventually

without you i cant breathe
you provide the oxygen i need
just by your presence
you make my heart beat with uncontrolable speed

we are linked at the hips
and when we say goodnight we seal it with a kiss
you complete my soul with a ray of sunshine
and i know for a fact their wont be one day you would miss

*dont be too harsh im only 15, and just started.
 
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