Does this blurb sound good for my story, please read, it's very short, easy 2 pts?

could you just do me a favor and tell me how it sounds? Thanks:

You've followed the lives of the world's greatest super heroes. Now follow along as they race against time to defeat the monster responsible for attempting to enslave the human race...
Frederick Tasman has never been a procrastinator, and he won't waste a second when a prophetic vision he is destined to foretell is engraved in his mind like a brand: "Ben's hands at seven will point in four directions, leaving the heroes deathly confused, but fear not my young ones, because the hand that peers south tells the truth...
Follow Ben's gaze on a map and find the team's name, where between the three points, nineteen separate shall be the same...
nineteen will become one, alas one’s spirit will stray, to be become the monster the heroes shall slay...
The monster shall be powerful, strategic and strong, but he was created from failure, one thing had gone wrong...
The heroes shall prevail and raise Ben’s sword hilt high using the strength of Thrice, and they shall make a choice, not without a price,"
Can nineteen teenage heroes really crack the prophecy before the creature strikes, or will they be left in the monster's shadows...?

And yes, I know 19 seems like a lot, but once you start reading, you really get into it and understand each of the characters. I'm just a little iffy on the prophecy and the blurb. Thanks for reading for me :)
 
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