Gummy Bears
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I once heard that time was precious, that you should never take it for granted. So why did I waste two hundred years of mine?
The scientists convinced them it wasn't an experiment. That the train would definitely work. The project wasn't the problem. The events in the middle were.
Eva volunteered to take part in a journey which would prove great advances in science. All she had to do was spend two weeks on a train with five strangers; a teenage insomniac, manic doctor, struggling musician, ex druggie and photographer. They underestimated the scientists intentions and now they're stuck in a place which should be familiar but is oh-so different.
She left the station to cheers and waves but returns to find the hollow beat of a once thriving community.
I know it needs work but do I need to include anything else? More of the plot? Does it make you want to read more? Thanks
The scientists convinced them it wasn't an experiment. That the train would definitely work. The project wasn't the problem. The events in the middle were.
Eva volunteered to take part in a journey which would prove great advances in science. All she had to do was spend two weeks on a train with five strangers; a teenage insomniac, manic doctor, struggling musician, ex druggie and photographer. They underestimated the scientists intentions and now they're stuck in a place which should be familiar but is oh-so different.
She left the station to cheers and waves but returns to find the hollow beat of a once thriving community.
I know it needs work but do I need to include anything else? More of the plot? Does it make you want to read more? Thanks