Does my poem make sense?

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I have to write a cryptic poem for english class about a character in a book I read. She gave us a format to follow and it goes like this:
Adjective Adjective Noun
Adverb Verb
Adjective Noun Adjective Noun
Adverb Noun Verb

This is my poem (She said to use a very descriptive words)
Relentless harrowing aggression
Knavishly liberating
Obscure force deft intellect
slowly humanity diminishes

Does this make sense? Show I "dumb down" some words, for this is only 8th grade english class.
Thanks a bunch ?
 
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