Does anyone like my poem?

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We saw, we met, we talked.
You made me smile.
We played, we joked, we walked.
You made me laugh.
We hugged, we gazed we stared.
You made me want.
We nearly kissed, we nearly loved, we still cared.

We argued, we fought, we left.
You made me think.
We ran, we hid, we closed.
You made me cry.
We didnt talk, we didn't speak, we lied.

The end is always the same:
You're not who I thought you were.

We glanced, we turned, we over-looked.
Did we make a mistake?
We thought, we forgot, we shook.
Did we make a mistake?
But we tried, it failed, we moved on.
We made a mistake.

We saw, we met, we talked.
You made me smile.
We played, we joked, we walked.
You made me laugh.
We hugged, we gazed we stared.
It made us want.
We didn't kiss, we didnt love, we still cared.

We repeated, we knew, we lost.
We made a mistake.

In the end it's always the same:
You are who I thought you were.
I'm 15.
I can play the piano & guitar, so I might try and work it into a song. You never know.
I just want it to be simple. (:
its not supposed to be about a date.
to me it's about two people, who meet, like each other, and nearly love, but something tears them apart, they fall out, and they try to forget. They start to think that the person isnt worth it.
They re-meet, and think that maybe they've made a mistake and try it out again, but they end up with the same result.
The person is who they thought they were: not worth it.
 
this is really really good!!! how old are you?
you have super amazing abilities!!! :D
i think this would make a good song too...if you're a musician try to it some chords to it...
 
It's not a really good poem. It's just like how a relationship starts and ends with a very bad date. How is my poem?
I went on Yahoo.com, I answered the question, I think to myself
Is this even a poem?
 
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