Does anybody else think this poem I wrote totally stinks?

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Step up, step up
Just step up, step up
To the plate
Step up

Walk up, walk up
Clench the bat in your hands
And clench it tight
No turning back, turning back

Take that deep breath
Swing the bat
But no, no
Just stand there

Wait a second
Contemplate that decision
Is it the right choice?
Stand there, stand there

Hang on
Second guess yourself
Make sure its right
Double check

Its not right
Now its bad
Third guess, oh yeah
Its right, its right

Look the pitcher in the eye
Watch his hands
Clench the bat
Again and again

Scuff your shoes
Nervous as hell
Watch the eyes
Then wipe your brow

The pitcher watches you
Tosses the ball
Clench the bat again
And swing, swing away

Dont know if you missed
Just know you tried
Sometimes trying isnt good enough
Step down, step down

Miserable now
Stare down that man
Who made you look like a fool
Maybe next time, next time

Your on your last nerve
Sitting on the bench
Tapping your foot
Wondering when is the right time

Should I now?
No, I'll wait, I'll wait
You think its not right
But it always is

Go up there
Run up, run up
Give him what he asked for
A suprise, bam, right in the face
 
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