Hollabackbird
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this is a poem I wrote, and I need to know if you think it's good, and any tips or suggestions. I'm a girl and 13. lol, sometimes tht affects answers.
Never Change
we had been best friends since we can remember
but of course we reached that age wher you get popular
yet I stayed the same
you think I couldn't be popular, or at least normal if I wanted to?
I could be that shy girl who has millions of friends
but that's not who I want to be
I do value our friendship, but I refuse to change who I am to keep it
I'm outgoing, outspoken, amd different for a reason you know
I really don't want to be like everyone else, and I don't cave in like some of my old friends
I'm not afraid to be who I want to be, and that will never change
thnx for reading, and thnx for commenting in advance.
last year I wrote a lot of poetry, because I was going through a rough year, but it's all good now. thnx again
Never Change
we had been best friends since we can remember
but of course we reached that age wher you get popular
yet I stayed the same
you think I couldn't be popular, or at least normal if I wanted to?
I could be that shy girl who has millions of friends
but that's not who I want to be
I do value our friendship, but I refuse to change who I am to keep it
I'm outgoing, outspoken, amd different for a reason you know
I really don't want to be like everyone else, and I don't cave in like some of my old friends
I'm not afraid to be who I want to be, and that will never change
thnx for reading, and thnx for commenting in advance.
last year I wrote a lot of poetry, because I was going through a rough year, but it's all good now. thnx again