Do you think this is a good poem. PS I'm only 10?

[b_rae79]

I wish you were here in my room, telling me how much you groom.
I wish you were here saying ''you're my best friend'', I wish you were here until the end.
I wish you were here saying that you care, I wish you were here so I'm not scared.
I wish you were here saying you have faith in me, I wish you were here saying I'm the one you can keep.

 

[Metalhead499]

Better then work I've seen from 12 year olds

 

[Michele]

i love it! =)