Do you think the song i wrote is good?

Taylah Purcell

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Trapped in this deep dark room
All alone with nothing to do
And all i can think about is you
Now you have the key won't you come and rescue me?
cause i'm still waiting here

(Chours)
Come wipe the tears from my eyes
Come and get me tonight
Don't leave me here all alone
Holding on to some pillow
Don't leave me here

I'm lookin around for my prince charming
waiting around for him to come chargen in
and come and save me
And i keep waiting
But he's nowhere to be seen

Chours x2

Bridge
And now i stand sored in hand
now i guess its up to me
cause there is no prince charming
to come and rescue me

Ch ourss (softly)




Please dont me to harsh its the very first song i have ever written if you think it sucks and its terrible please just say to try again not something really mean.
I am still playing around with it i just wanna no if there is hope

Thank-you
Woops
when it says Ch ourss (softly)
what i mean is Chours (softly)
 
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