T.M Harris
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this is a book I'm writing do you think it sounds good I'v been writting it for awhile. Tell me you're true opinions i can't trust my friends because i think they will just tell me it's good and it might not be. Please tell me but also i want ideas on what else could happenand names if possible. OOh also titles just saying
heres part of it:
Towering trees surround the sides of Karma’s tree fort. Forest sounds sang her to sleep when she stayed the night in her favorite place. Occasionally, when the moon is out, Karma could hear the movement of animals in the brush. In a flash she awoke and sat up. When the noises ceased, she slid out of bed. Her white night gown shined in the moonlight. Karma was a humble young witch with a big future ahead of her. Karma strolled over to the spacious window and sat down on the bench. Karma was well known and feared in the witch craft world, as were her two sister Chasity and Faith. Karma grabbed a piece of her champagne hair and twisted it between her fingers. Karma was a very tricky witch she always had something up her sleeve. She scanned around the fort it was some what clean, there were a whole bunch of little glistening bottles filled with colorful liquids on a shelf. Karma had stocked up on vanquishing ingredients she glanced out the window and to her surprise two young woman were waving at her. One had brimming strawberry blonde hair and the other had long coiled beige hair.
“Karma our you up there?” Her sister Faith bawled her strawberry blonde hair blowing in the breeze.
“Yeah I’ll be down in a second I just have to change!” Karma wailed then turned to her small wooden dresser. She rapidly changed out of her night gown into some jeans and a t-shirt. She treaded over to the stairs and climbed down steadily. Karma was a well balanced girl she never really stumbled or tripped. When Karma got to the last step she hastily jumped to the ground and looked at her two sisters smiling faces. The three of them looked so much alike they were each approximately a month apart. Faith was the youngest Karma was the middle child and Chasity was the oldest. They were very close to each other, the most powerful sister love there could possibly be.
“I thought you would never be down!” Chasity said slyly stroking her coiled beige hair.
“Sorry I thought it was tomorrow night you guys were coming.” Karma said blushing but quickly shuck her head “Lets go before were late!” Karma said and the three of them strutted through the woods. They were heading to there Aunt Katrina’s lair in the middle of the woods. Katrina is a very favorable yet dexterous witch she is one with the woods. But lately Katrina has been off of her game and that worried the three sisters. Usually Katrina would be out and about helping people with magical problems but now she never left her little lair.
heres part of it:
Towering trees surround the sides of Karma’s tree fort. Forest sounds sang her to sleep when she stayed the night in her favorite place. Occasionally, when the moon is out, Karma could hear the movement of animals in the brush. In a flash she awoke and sat up. When the noises ceased, she slid out of bed. Her white night gown shined in the moonlight. Karma was a humble young witch with a big future ahead of her. Karma strolled over to the spacious window and sat down on the bench. Karma was well known and feared in the witch craft world, as were her two sister Chasity and Faith. Karma grabbed a piece of her champagne hair and twisted it between her fingers. Karma was a very tricky witch she always had something up her sleeve. She scanned around the fort it was some what clean, there were a whole bunch of little glistening bottles filled with colorful liquids on a shelf. Karma had stocked up on vanquishing ingredients she glanced out the window and to her surprise two young woman were waving at her. One had brimming strawberry blonde hair and the other had long coiled beige hair.
“Karma our you up there?” Her sister Faith bawled her strawberry blonde hair blowing in the breeze.
“Yeah I’ll be down in a second I just have to change!” Karma wailed then turned to her small wooden dresser. She rapidly changed out of her night gown into some jeans and a t-shirt. She treaded over to the stairs and climbed down steadily. Karma was a well balanced girl she never really stumbled or tripped. When Karma got to the last step she hastily jumped to the ground and looked at her two sisters smiling faces. The three of them looked so much alike they were each approximately a month apart. Faith was the youngest Karma was the middle child and Chasity was the oldest. They were very close to each other, the most powerful sister love there could possibly be.
“I thought you would never be down!” Chasity said slyly stroking her coiled beige hair.
“Sorry I thought it was tomorrow night you guys were coming.” Karma said blushing but quickly shuck her head “Lets go before were late!” Karma said and the three of them strutted through the woods. They were heading to there Aunt Katrina’s lair in the middle of the woods. Katrina is a very favorable yet dexterous witch she is one with the woods. But lately Katrina has been off of her game and that worried the three sisters. Usually Katrina would be out and about helping people with magical problems but now she never left her little lair.