Do you think I have a future in writing or poetry?

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A future in writing? It's impossible to tell based on one poem.

A future in poetry? This seems promising, but unfortunately there are no careers in poetry these days. In other words, you seem to have talent but you'll never make any money at it.

If you're considering some form of writing as a career, it'll most likely have to be in novels. There's simply no market for short stories and poetry.
 
The Soul in You
I walk solitary and see you there
My anamnesis is clad with you
But I’ve never descried your face

You hold me tight and secure
I descend into your dream
I see the Soul in you

You left me so long ago
It feels insincere
I occlude my eyes and go away

We are finally together
You caress me and elevate me high
I wish the Soul would stay

You have made me this way
But I still denounce myself
You have my mettle

I don’t understand why I love you
I behold impenetrable figures
My crown no longer knows

I’m dubious of your once
I don’t know if I should trust you
Dithering loving you

I can see the Soul in you
You only see the shell of me
I can’t let you in

My heart opens
A river flows gracefully
You feel me hurt

I want you here
But you must go
To be with your other

I want your love
But you love them
I want you to see the Soul in me
 
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