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laurengitus
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and if so, do you know of any poetry or writing magazines I could submit one to? and if so, which one should I submit?
Where do you find yourself?
Feeling sad or alone?
When each day feels the same
When life feels a drone
I'll be your hope
Your own wishing star
To cast out your dreams
To admire from near or from afar
To be there beside you
One to trust and confide to
Know that life is what you make it
Your own story untold
Based on your choices
Your story unfolds
Into something dreary or something grand
Lifes what you make it
Its all in your hands
EMPTINESS
Brightens the soul,
Beauty in your own eyes you will behold.
DISCIPLINE
Opens the mind,
So many more oppurtunitys for you to find.
BEAUTY
You can obtain,
If only from temptation you can abstain.
DEATH
Is on the road ahead of you,
But you find yourself much to delusional
To know you are the one who has beheaded you.
We've reached the end of the road my friend
The train comes a clackin' down the track
Its much to late to be turnin back now, baby
Give a little bit, push a little harder
Even with all my effort I still manage to move farther
Down the tunnel, down the hole
The bottomless pit that holds my soul
I dont know where to go or what to do
Except across these tracks where it all is through
Save me, save me
From myself
I'm breaking down again
and I'm crying out for help
Save me, save me
From myself
I'm breaking down again
and I'm crying out for help
The pathes we've trailed and the mountains weve climbed
We've done this all for nothing
We've done this all this time
You're never gonna make me
You'll only bend and break me
and take me back to where I was at the start
I cant do this any longer, its tearing me apart
We see eye to eye just like a flower and a tree
I dont know what you are, but all I am is me.
the first one is me trying to be uplifting and show people there is hope.
the second is talking about my anorexia.
the song was used to get out my feelings of depression and hopelessness.
do you like them? and which one do you like best?
Where do you find yourself?
Feeling sad or alone?
When each day feels the same
When life feels a drone
I'll be your hope
Your own wishing star
To cast out your dreams
To admire from near or from afar
To be there beside you
One to trust and confide to
Know that life is what you make it
Your own story untold
Based on your choices
Your story unfolds
Into something dreary or something grand
Lifes what you make it
Its all in your hands
EMPTINESS
Brightens the soul,
Beauty in your own eyes you will behold.
DISCIPLINE
Opens the mind,
So many more oppurtunitys for you to find.
BEAUTY
You can obtain,
If only from temptation you can abstain.
DEATH
Is on the road ahead of you,
But you find yourself much to delusional
To know you are the one who has beheaded you.
We've reached the end of the road my friend
The train comes a clackin' down the track
Its much to late to be turnin back now, baby
Give a little bit, push a little harder
Even with all my effort I still manage to move farther
Down the tunnel, down the hole
The bottomless pit that holds my soul
I dont know where to go or what to do
Except across these tracks where it all is through
Save me, save me
From myself
I'm breaking down again
and I'm crying out for help
Save me, save me
From myself
I'm breaking down again
and I'm crying out for help
The pathes we've trailed and the mountains weve climbed
We've done this all for nothing
We've done this all this time
You're never gonna make me
You'll only bend and break me
and take me back to where I was at the start
I cant do this any longer, its tearing me apart
We see eye to eye just like a flower and a tree
I dont know what you are, but all I am is me.
the first one is me trying to be uplifting and show people there is hope.
the second is talking about my anorexia.
the song was used to get out my feelings of depression and hopelessness.
do you like them? and which one do you like best?