I'm alone, in the dark
In this constant war
And the people i love
Only want it more
You see what you want
Like you have before
Forget about the people
Who's hearts you tore
Within the fight
You betrayed your own
And you lost that little glimmer
That would guide you home
You don't care about us no more
Self pity mind
Let us rust before
We can spread the word
To regain your soul
And open up the gate
To your broken core
It's not too late
I can see it clear
All the fear
That you have for those
You hold dear
Feel it in your chest
Swallow this pain
You're not the only one
Who's caught in the rain
Every step that you take
Makes the path unclear
Every second that you waste
Is blood shed and tears
It's probably not well put together. I'm pretty new to writing, but i want an honest opinion. I know it could probably be worded differently, put together better, but keep in mind i made this up during my 15 minute breaks at work for 2 days. So about an hour or so of thought. Oh, and it's somewhere along the lines of rap and hip-hop.
In this constant war
And the people i love
Only want it more
You see what you want
Like you have before
Forget about the people
Who's hearts you tore
Within the fight
You betrayed your own
And you lost that little glimmer
That would guide you home
You don't care about us no more
Self pity mind
Let us rust before
We can spread the word
To regain your soul
And open up the gate
To your broken core
It's not too late
I can see it clear
All the fear
That you have for those
You hold dear
Feel it in your chest
Swallow this pain
You're not the only one
Who's caught in the rain
Every step that you take
Makes the path unclear
Every second that you waste
Is blood shed and tears
It's probably not well put together. I'm pretty new to writing, but i want an honest opinion. I know it could probably be worded differently, put together better, but keep in mind i made this up during my 15 minute breaks at work for 2 days. So about an hour or so of thought. Oh, and it's somewhere along the lines of rap and hip-hop.