Do you like this song i wrote?

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Traci [:

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i like to write songs, and i just wrote this one yesterday.
be honest about the lyrics, and tell me if you think i should change them any :)


Your eyes so green
the softest dream
the way you looked at me
I cant believe
That i didnt see
That you where the one for me

What i did to you
I didnt tell the truth
I didnt deserve you
The one thing that was right
In my wrong
How you loved me so long

Im in trouble
Now i love you double
can't stop thinkin bout you
They way i cheated
while your heart beated
I could hear it break..
under your breath
It fealt like death

What i did to you
I didnt tell the truth
I didnt deserve you
THe one thing thatwas right
in all my wrong
You loved me so long

what will i do
cant take my mind off of you
i dont get a second chance
to make things right
dont wanna start the fight
this time

What i did to you
i didnt tell the truth
i didnt deserve you
THe one thing that was right
in my wrong
you loved me so long

Your eyes so green..
The softest dream...
 
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