Do you like this poem of mine??

Nero - HBK fan

New member
The hunchback of the old church!

Born was I when god was depressed
Left on the door steps of a church, undressed
My appearance scared everyone inside the church
Nuns, priests even Christ himself was distressed

Raised as a servant, never got any respect to taste
Abhorred and despised by all, my childhood went in haste
They say beauty is a jewel of love
ALAS, even my love for a girl went in waste

With a face so ugly I couldn’t even weep
I always dreamt of that one girl I love and never did I sleep
How can I ever love her, even in my thoughts?
My broken heart’s sorrows are very deep

She loves someone else, of course how can she ever love me
The face I posses can never be loved, this even her eyes can see
An abhorred hunchback’s heart shall always be broken
But I pray she always remains happy, may god never do the thing to anyone which he did to me


Feel free to criticize it.
 
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