1st
I never knew
That I wasn't strong
Until I had to hold on.
One moment lost
In a thousand days.
Not much time
To consider
Letting go.
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
Mountains will fall.
Don't leave me here.
I can't live.
Not without you.
When I fall, please remember
To reach out your hand.
2nd
I didn't know
It would be so hard
To hang on to everything.
Memories, laughter
But sadness too.
What would be left,
If everything I knew
Was gone?
3rd
Some people fall
Some people never let go
And then there's the ones
Who can't make up their mind
Caught in a web
Of tangled thoughts and dreams
You have to make a choice:
Fall or move on
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
Stars will fall.
Don't leave me her.
I can't live.
Not without you.
When I fall, please remember
To reach out your hand...
And catch me now.
4th
I lost everything,
But I didn't lose you.
I'm losing me,
But I didn't lose you.
If I lost you,
I would never make it.
Because of you, my friend,
I've made it through
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
I will not fall!
You didn't leave me here!
I can live
And then one day,
I will remember
To reach out my hand...
To reach out.... my hand....
And catch you now.
I just want you to tell me if it needs work, or maybe some of the lines are a bit too weird. I don't know. Just critique it to the best of your ability, please, and let me know if you like it or not. Remember, it's for a story, and I also wonder if this would work as a song. Thank you in advance.
I never knew
That I wasn't strong
Until I had to hold on.
One moment lost
In a thousand days.
Not much time
To consider
Letting go.
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
Mountains will fall.
Don't leave me here.
I can't live.
Not without you.
When I fall, please remember
To reach out your hand.
2nd
I didn't know
It would be so hard
To hang on to everything.
Memories, laughter
But sadness too.
What would be left,
If everything I knew
Was gone?
3rd
Some people fall
Some people never let go
And then there's the ones
Who can't make up their mind
Caught in a web
Of tangled thoughts and dreams
You have to make a choice:
Fall or move on
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
Stars will fall.
Don't leave me her.
I can't live.
Not without you.
When I fall, please remember
To reach out your hand...
And catch me now.
4th
I lost everything,
But I didn't lose you.
I'm losing me,
But I didn't lose you.
If I lost you,
I would never make it.
Because of you, my friend,
I've made it through
Chorus
Reach out your hand
Be strong through the river
Of tears raining down.
I will not fall!
You didn't leave me here!
I can live
And then one day,
I will remember
To reach out my hand...
To reach out.... my hand....
And catch you now.
I just want you to tell me if it needs work, or maybe some of the lines are a bit too weird. I don't know. Just critique it to the best of your ability, please, and let me know if you like it or not. Remember, it's for a story, and I also wonder if this would work as a song. Thank you in advance.