Do you like poetry to be well thought out or spontaneous?

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Happy Hiram

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A reading of some poems by Frederic, Caz, and myself. Let me know what you think.

http://www.youtube.com/profile?nomobile=1&user=mercurieretrograde#p/u/0/F_sL_l9hevE
 
A comment on your reading: Honestly speaking, you need some more practice before your reading could sustain a listener's attention! Though your voice has a very nice sound, your fumbling, stumbling (no, no mumbling ;)) is a bit of a let down!

I commend you for daring to come on camera...with whatever you have! Keep going :)

As for poetry, any spontaneous outburst that touches chord is pleasing enough! And a well-thought poem that takes care to avoid pitfalls is better...
 
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