DO YOU LIKE MY SHORT LOVE POEM?

[x-AwokenNightmare-x]

My love for you is like angels,
Guiding me through the night.
Their brightness is blinding,
Forever shining a white light.

thx in advancee

 

[shireen]

its really short.. but its nice

 

[Megan P]

that is really nice

the last line (im being real critical here) goes out of rhythm, but that is just me being a stupid critic lolz.

its really nice a story in a few words haha

 

[Alice]

I'm not intentionally trying to be harsh,
but I personally don't like it.
It's too cheesy and the metaphor doesn't make sense.

 

[ox.tahliiia]

yeah, that's waaaaay cute

 

[art vandelay]

Hello twin. Yes it is nice. Simple, but nice.

 

[Severus Snape]

NO. I HATE IT.What I like is :

His hair is full of grease,
And is very hard to please,
He is a very special ape,
By the name of Severus Snape.

Yes. You must be from Ravenclaw. So, 246 points from Ravenclaw.

 

[AliceCullen#13]

haha..yeah its cute....congrats..xx