Do you like my poetry?

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I sit here alone waiting alone.
Waiting for you to call.
You let me down ounce more.
My feelings mixed and emotions stop.
As my heart dose drop.
I feel like I wanna runaway.
Into a world where I can stay and not feel so left out.


Did you feel down.
Did you ever feel lost.
Did you ever feel pushed out.
Like there's nothing but doubt.


Away with this life.
Away with this world.
Away with the thoughts of loneliness that take on my mind.
That's the way I feel sometimes.


I'm 11.
 
its ok
you should see the one i wrote its here hopefully you like it
in yahoo questions good work on the poem its ok
im eleven too
 
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