Do you like my poems?

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Someday, I want to run a far distance
Take the ones I love and leave the rest.
I want to see the unseen, and explore the unknown.
I want to know what no one else knows, and I want to see things from a different perspective.
I need to know what it feels like, to be above the rest and know that nothing can stop me.
As day turns to day I have realized that you cannot judge your life on what you have, but what you made of yourself matters
But for this I do not need to change, I need to be me.

scars

When you left me you not only broke my heart, you gave me a scar. It was deep and painful, but I got through it. It will heal but the mark you left me will always be there, just a little mark to remind me of you. A scar to prove that our past happened, and was real. I cant go back nor forget what happened. Every time I see that scar it makes me cry, I see the love and memories you gave me. And for now, I realize why scars matter, because they remind you of the past.

please critique them and be honest
 
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