Do you like my poem? What do you think?

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what do you think? should i change anything?

Die Within Herself

A tear falls,
grasping to her cheek,
fighting back the drop down.
Her face glows in the sunlight,
but she feels no warmth.
Her heart is tangled in
shame,
though she has done nothing to be placed
on this corner in her
life.
He stares at her.
They stare at her.
We all stare at her.
We do nothing for her,
just let her die within herself.
Die in shame.
Die in remembrance.
Die with no one.
 
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