Do you like my poem so far?

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even tho im not done, here it is;


Scenes of a bloody quarrel in my mind is this,
love lost in blood, and souls lost in a black abyss

Spiraling downward, into the nothingness of grey matter,
sounds of defeat, and betrayal, as the window shatters.

Soldiers marching, with their blades held high,
a world endowed with destruction, with happiness in disguise.........


(thats it, in not finished, but do u like it???)

its called "In my mind" by, Danielle Kristen.
 
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