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bill b
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i look up in the big blue sky,
a robin sings sweetly;
the chirping bird is flying there
and looking down at me.
im getting up and walking 'round,
the meadow fresh and green;
the flowers bowing at my feet
looking so good and clean.
the morning dew is crisp and new,
remnants of summer rain;
the sun is shining now so bright
in hopes to ease all pain.
i walk beside the river blue,
and see fish swim with glee;
red and yellow and purple too
the rainbow of the sea.
the sun is setting all too soon
the day's come to an end.
i look around just one more time
and wish time would extend.
as i retire now to sleep,
i look back on the day;
i spent some time with nature and
i'd like no other way.
i know some of it doesnt flow well but i just wrote that out. 1st draft. please dont be meannn. im just a kid on my dads yahoo account. constructive critisism only pleaseeeee<33
please dont stealll<33
please dont stealll<33
a robin sings sweetly;
the chirping bird is flying there
and looking down at me.
im getting up and walking 'round,
the meadow fresh and green;
the flowers bowing at my feet
looking so good and clean.
the morning dew is crisp and new,
remnants of summer rain;
the sun is shining now so bright
in hopes to ease all pain.
i walk beside the river blue,
and see fish swim with glee;
red and yellow and purple too
the rainbow of the sea.
the sun is setting all too soon
the day's come to an end.
i look around just one more time
and wish time would extend.
as i retire now to sleep,
i look back on the day;
i spent some time with nature and
i'd like no other way.
i know some of it doesnt flow well but i just wrote that out. 1st draft. please dont be meannn. im just a kid on my dads yahoo account. constructive critisism only pleaseeeee<33
please dont stealll<33
please dont stealll<33