J
Jane C
Guest
Reborn
Accepted by a vampire with silk skin answered my prayer to loss all my sanity
My beautiful stranger moved to fast to be real but with more grace the a gilded dove
as he leaves me sedated near the stone fire cold with ashes
My body contorted with the pain
Candles laugh as I lay there
my veins swell and tendons burst
Every bone breaks
I suffocate from his crimson breath left on my tongue as it creeps down my throat burning my lungs
Scarlet drips down my neck where he had arranged his supple lips for his kiss of death
Mesmerized with desire and longing to be beautiful like my stranger I fell for his majestic seduction
Now I desire something else
I thirst for what I have yet to taste
I awake still half asleep
Searching for my first victim
Striping his soul to the bone into the night
i am sixteen by the way...im not sure if this is finished yet but do you like it? is there more i should add? what should i do to make it better? im handing it in to my english teacher soo what do you think?
Accepted by a vampire with silk skin answered my prayer to loss all my sanity
My beautiful stranger moved to fast to be real but with more grace the a gilded dove
as he leaves me sedated near the stone fire cold with ashes
My body contorted with the pain
Candles laugh as I lay there
my veins swell and tendons burst
Every bone breaks
I suffocate from his crimson breath left on my tongue as it creeps down my throat burning my lungs
Scarlet drips down my neck where he had arranged his supple lips for his kiss of death
Mesmerized with desire and longing to be beautiful like my stranger I fell for his majestic seduction
Now I desire something else
I thirst for what I have yet to taste
I awake still half asleep
Searching for my first victim
Striping his soul to the bone into the night
i am sixteen by the way...im not sure if this is finished yet but do you like it? is there more i should add? what should i do to make it better? im handing it in to my english teacher soo what do you think?
