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Someone asked a question, and I contrived something off the top of my head. What ya' think?
An arduous history the United States consumes,
Thus, we've transcended most of the racial gloom.
A black man in office is indeed a remarkable sight,
So the change we're encountering helps young men like I
Strengthen the ambitious foresight.
Hopefully the world evolves into a world of serene,
Instead of the prior malevolence and the despot regime.
Ben, please elaborate how my reasoning is off. Also, it's my opinion of what I think about the United States, so it's not supposed to be emotional. Thanks for your thoughts, though, although your criticism is vague.
An arduous history the United States consumes,
Thus, we've transcended most of the racial gloom.
A black man in office is indeed a remarkable sight,
So the change we're encountering helps young men like I
Strengthen the ambitious foresight.
Hopefully the world evolves into a world of serene,
Instead of the prior malevolence and the despot regime.
Ben, please elaborate how my reasoning is off. Also, it's my opinion of what I think about the United States, so it's not supposed to be emotional. Thanks for your thoughts, though, although your criticism is vague.