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El Sarito
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I wrote a short poem about a leaf falling to the ground. Please tell me what I can do to make it better.
The leaf falls softly from the tree.
It floats onto the ground.
There it lays, quiet and still.
It lies there, safe and sound.
thank youz in advance *.*
The leaf falls softly from the tree.
It floats onto the ground.
There it lays, quiet and still.
It lies there, safe and sound.
thank youz in advance *.*