Do people here like my poem?

[Angel Vasquez]

Questions that need to be answered

Have you ever heard the wolf moon howl?
If only at the crack of dawn.
Watch out because it may prowl,
So always keep on your guard.

Have you ever tasted the rainbow?
With it’s many flavors.
The tastes of many exotic places,
so much in it to savor.

Have you ever heard the sound of bells
when an angel gets it’s wings?
It may be the most amazing sound you hear.
Just listen as it rings.

Have you ever saw the angels cry?
With their teardrops on your skin.
They feel like sadness surrounds you,
as if drops of melancholy or chagrin.

Have you ever dreamed those were your footprints on the moon?
The tears they cried,
the times they shared,
a perfect note, in tune.

 

[shirleyf]

I love this poem. Interesting and original. Thanks for sharing.

 

[lovechild]

The first part needs some work for a smoother flow... but right about the time the angel started crying it became genius

 

[lovechild]

The first part needs some work for a smoother flow... but right about the time the angel started crying it became genius

 

[Kevin]

I dont like poetry i like cheezits but good poem

 

[Brainwashed_Poet]

This poem is indeed nice, but you may want to consider consistency. You have beautiful visions, but you have to express the whole thought before you transition to the next stanza. Find good transitional words and punctuation marks to make the flow of the verses and lines more smooth. Good job, and I hope this helped

 

[Julie]

That is a very beautiful poem. You got a gift! My favorite stanza is the one with the rainbow.