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I got really bored and decided to write these poems. To me I dont think there that "profound". LOLL! I think there a little cheezy but I think there kinda good. Do you think they sound good? DO I need to fix it or anything.
Thanks in advance.
1) Just One Kiss:
Thinking of you dady by day,
Hoping for you to walk my way.
Shaking inside with all this love,
Just as pure as a lonely dove.
Wishing and wondering if you'll ever love me,
Trying to find out if that could be.
Dreaming about what our future hold,
Waiting for our love untill it molds.
Pondering over my thoughts about you,
One and one always add up to two.
Trying to forget all of this,
All it takes is just one kiss.
2)The Otherside:
Gray skies, dark lies,
does anybody hear my cries?
Sitting, watching, wondering about,
Trusting you is my #1 dought.
Stabbing me in the back,
Stupidity is something you dont lack.
Knowing what you did to me hurt,
Not apologizing, how curt.
Thinking of every move I'll make,
I'll get you back, it's a piece of cake.
Taking a kinfe and watching it glide,
you'll be the one on the other side.
3) Just Reality:
Running away like a little girl,
Look at how my world's in a swirl.
Shivering and worrying underneath my sheet,
Listening to the pounds of my heart beat.
Glaring at how the world goes by,
Hapilly ever afters are just plain lies.
Thinking of how my life could be,
It can never be just about me.
I wish you could know how I feel,
Guess you don't I'll just have to deal.
Is life about our personality,
Or is it just reality.
And again Thanks in advance
Thanks in advance.
1) Just One Kiss:
Thinking of you dady by day,
Hoping for you to walk my way.
Shaking inside with all this love,
Just as pure as a lonely dove.
Wishing and wondering if you'll ever love me,
Trying to find out if that could be.
Dreaming about what our future hold,
Waiting for our love untill it molds.
Pondering over my thoughts about you,
One and one always add up to two.
Trying to forget all of this,
All it takes is just one kiss.
2)The Otherside:
Gray skies, dark lies,
does anybody hear my cries?
Sitting, watching, wondering about,
Trusting you is my #1 dought.
Stabbing me in the back,
Stupidity is something you dont lack.
Knowing what you did to me hurt,
Not apologizing, how curt.
Thinking of every move I'll make,
I'll get you back, it's a piece of cake.
Taking a kinfe and watching it glide,
you'll be the one on the other side.
3) Just Reality:
Running away like a little girl,
Look at how my world's in a swirl.
Shivering and worrying underneath my sheet,
Listening to the pounds of my heart beat.
Glaring at how the world goes by,
Hapilly ever afters are just plain lies.
Thinking of how my life could be,
It can never be just about me.
I wish you could know how I feel,
Guess you don't I'll just have to deal.
Is life about our personality,
Or is it just reality.
And again Thanks in advance